Sumi H. Inkblot

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Ohayo and welcome to the YWS! :hands you cookie with "Welcome to the YWS!" on it in green icing: I'm Sumi. Da Baroness and Terminal Geek. :mrgreen: Do you write ...

Yes!! Juuni Kokki fans are a rare breed, huh? Yay! :D We are, aren't we? YAY! :pumps hand up and down enthusiastically: Oh, pardon me...where *have* my manners gone? (I ...

um, 6/10 because it doesn't make much sense to me. Would I read it? YEAH. Carnival of Dreams

Sounds like a mystery opening with a poker scene. (You like those kinds of things, eh?) I wouldn't read... Carnival of the Legends

G'bye! Good luck! Break a leg out there! ;)

JUPITER!!!!!!! it possible....I'VE MET ANOTHER JUUNI KOKKI FAN?!?!?!?!? :points incredulously at Youko in the avatar:

Young = you aren't sure what to say about your location, so just shut up before you say something TOO bad :lol: (okay, more nicely phrased then that...) Older = ...

4/10...Tigger :p

Aside from the capitalization issues and the inconsistent rhyming scheme, it's basically okay. The 3/6 stanzas are a little iffy....the "creeping" throws off the rhyme. Try "reaching" or "stalking". S

Ayumi-san, I'll be frank with you. This story is driving me crazy . ***SPOILERS AHOY, for all who have not been reading Naruto*** Your style and everything is okay, but ...

nanowrimo.org, of course. :mrgreen: :roll:

Haha! Thanks, guys, for the 'tiques. :mrgreen: There's actually a weird story behind this.... on one of my other sites, there's a poetry forum and a "snippets" thread...and I wrote ...

7/10...

9/10, sir . :lol: